Vision= Well done. You even got the fluffiness of the tails right! I also don't see any erasure marks so thats a plus! Shading actually follows the proper lines aswell.
Originality= I don't see any other drawings like this. So it seems a pretty original idea.
Technique= Looks as if ya first did a pencil sketch of this then did a light flat colour, which then you proceeded to shade. I like the sketch style, it kind of adds a fluffiness to his fur. The anatomy seems pretty good, arms and legs are all in proportion and aren't insanely outta whack. All the colours seem right to.
Impact= VEX is impressed.